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Postby Thaumaturgist » Thu Nov 05, 2009 5:06 pm

This are direct copies from the laxius forum. I'm too lazy to correct and fix them from typos and misspellings +::shhhh


Writings:

***Things from my novel project***
Birth of Magic:
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The notes from our ancestors, which had a writing story from about twenty thousand years are saved not only their way of life, but also important change – the beginning of the magic.

From the notes today we know that she – the magic is born from about thirteen thousand years ago. Until that day over our world Meldarana emerged two developed species. The first one is our specie – the humans, while the other one, which ruled over the world is the great breed of fire-breathing dragons. Millennium after millennium our ancestors lived in the deeps of the forests and caves, hiding from the dragons, and for that reason they called themselves Shadow race, or the equal word from their language – telners. Our ancestors also called the dragons lorcons, which means Winged fires . The dragons, which for that time were more then thousand consider the humans for nothing more than hiding in holes food. The majesty of the dragons were from the shine of the existence, until the day before thirteen thousand and one hundred years ago, when from the skies fell a real gift for our ancestors. There, where is today the elven forest crashed a huge and strange metal ship. In that time that place were a wide field with low mountains, with caves, in which lived some of our ancestors. The bravest of them went to the strange ship to explore it. They found hundreds of human-like creatures, which were tall about the same as them, with the same body-structure, but still – they were nothing like our ancestors. Their skin were light-blue, their hairs were from about hundred very thick filaments. Their ears looked like the half of the butterflies wings – a upper wide ear-part, under that a hollow middle zone, and under that – another, but not that wide ear-part. Their eyes were little bigger from the human ones, and the bright-green cat pupil filled the whole eye. In the first meet our ancestors where frightened and wondered if they should make contact with them, but the creatures quickly cleared all the fears of our ancestors, showing that they are friendly and even understand the human language. Our ancestors named the creatures nurtons – sky people, because of that the creatures came from the sky and because their skin also have the sky color. The ancestors found the nurtons as an ally, which were developed and had some advance knowledge. They manage to drive away the arrived dragons with their strange weapons, which as the ancestors write, had a hole, from which a sgort green light flied. This weapons manage to go through the dragon’s skin, hurting them badly. The ancestors and the nurtons quickly became friends, living together – the ancestors gave shelter to the nurtons, which protected them from the dragons. This way together they manage to kill hundreds of dragons for about one hundred years. But then – before thirteen thousand years ago from the heavens came another change, but this time a very devastating change, which was deadly for everyone. From the sky fell a world-wide meteor rain, but not ordinary meteors – from the sky fell thousands strange looking purple crystals. They fell everywhere – oceans, mountains, fields, forests – everywhere. With their crash they shattered into purple dust. But not the world-wide meteor rain made the change, but the dust. There are no existing purple crystals today, so we can only guess that they were filled with some kind of radiation, which made the world change. This dust started mutations only to humans, dragons and nurtons. Most of the dragons quickly lost their flames, their blood became cold as ice and soon they became ice-breathing. Strangely enough, but a huge part of the other dragons quickly started to shrink, changing into today’s drakes. They also loosed their fire, but they became masters of creating thunderballs. Some of the killed in the rain dragons revived and became the feared and very deadly black dragons, but they fell asleep for centuries.

For the humans the mutations were devastating – the human babies gained purple skin and because of the radiation, their brain became bigger, changed the shape of their heads. They became into what we know today smart, but fierce imps. Huge part of the kids gained grey skin, their arms and legs became lean, and their faces became very ugly. They also loosed huge part of their mind and became fierce wild creatures. Now we know that they also manage to separate as breed and became to the goblins which we know today. The elders also mutate. Their skin wrinkled even more, and became dark-brown, their mouths became little longer, and their noses became wide. They gave the beginning of the today’s trolls. Only the strongest and healthy ancestors survived. Most of them died, some of them became fierce and escaped into the wild lands, giving the birth of many legends about undeads, vampires, humans with body of animals and others.

The most interesting mutation was the one with the nurtons. They became very human-like – their skin became just like the one of the humans, but little lighter. Each of their thick hair-filaments separated into many thin pieces, and became just like the human hair. Their pupils became much more human-like, but they remain cat-like and still very bright-green. Their ears also changed, the lowest part shrank and vanish, while the upper part became longer and little pointy. Their faces became the same as the human ones, but very little longer and with astonishing beauty.

Huge role for this mutation in the nurtons is linked to the blowed in the meteor rain broken ship. In the explosion the ship generators released a huge amount of energy and the pieces from this energy merged with the radiation from the crystal’s dust. The new, merged energy seems to be taking effect on the plants of the region in which the ship crashed, because of their quick advance. For little time a huge forest grow which we today know as the elven forest. The nurtons taked their new shape very hard, they also decided to change the name which the humans gave to them to elves – word from their own language, the meaning of which they never revealed. The elves, began to avoid the humans, preferring to live in this new forest, which became their home – the new crashed ship, as they called it.

But the crystals brought not only death, destruction, mutation and sorrow. They also gave the birth to magic itself. Some of our survived ancestors soon discovered that they can move little objects just with the power of their mind. With time they manage to create fire with concentration of their mind, with the time passing by they also realized that they can have other skills aswell, which they started to developt, finding in them solution to deflect the remaining dragon kingdom. But not all of our ancestors had this powers, which quickly made envy and conflicts.

The elves discovered that they can actually speak with nature and with the animals, and also with spirits. The spirits are actually another effect from the radiation, dead souls which were able to continue their existence after their horrible death. Some of them merged themselves with the trees, getting the shape of little fairies, nymphs and even dryads. The elves also learned to use magic, which was like a payback for the destroyed technology advance they had. Still, we don’t know what exactly magical skills each elf have, but we know that they found the way not only to speak with nature, but also control it – they learned the way to control the winds and the water. They also learned to create with magic nature elements, but they also learn to summon spirits. The elves are famous also with the fact that they are the best healers, they also used their skills to melt the remaining of their ship, making from the ruined metal parts unique swords, bows and other powerful weapons.


Short "text-drawings":
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Erina's cat:
This is a star-formation, which can be saw from the valleys between Gernasa and the Milfirits and north from Gernasa Erina is myth goddess, and her cat is sayed that is her guardian, which watch not over her, but also the whole north lands, which are her "kingdom". This formation really do looks like a cat and with two very shiny stars, located there where the eyes should be. The two stars (Smiff and Agora) are called "The eyes", because they do make the star-formation to look like a watching cat.

The crystal rose:
This is a very rare specie of roses, which grows only when the Great Winter rules for two entire years almost the whole north continent with it's cold hug. As form it looks like the red rose, but they are unique with the fact the rose's body and leafs are fully transperant and cornered, which may do confuse that this is the work of a fine artist on a crystal. But this rose it is alive - it's aroma is the most unique in the entire world, much sweeter then the smell of the other roses


Little info and about some parts of the world:
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Desert Sherniena:
This huge desert is located on the south continent Keramiona. No one really explored it fully, because of it's deadly conditations - sands storms, extreme hot temperatures, there are even rumors about misty fierce creatures. The legend of the creation of Sherniena is saying that before eight thousand years ago this lands were full with life, but after a deadly and suicide war the desert were born. It is said that the war were between trolls and survived the meteor storm pure fire-breathing dragons. The trolls at that times were powerful and mighty mages and manage to kill all the dragons at this parts of the world, but the last dying dragon is said that made a powerful curse upon the trolls, which made them selfish and cruel creatures, which made them to start wars between each other, which made them to seperate and spread in the entire world, losing their magical skills. The desert itself is born because of the powerful troll's magic and the dragon's fire. The last signs of life of this desert were destroyed with the power of the curse.

Ksersell - the white town:
This town is called the white town, because it is covered with snow at the entire year. It's located in the far north parts of the north continent, beyond the huge mountain Gernasa. The same north lands which are under the "majesty" of the moon Ivelin, which is causing the sun's blockout for this parts of the world and the Great Winter every twenty years. The people of Gernasa may live in the coldest town in the entire world, but they are the only ones which can see the full beauty of the winter - Ivelin's shadow is making the days to be almost dark as the nights and the nights - even darker. Because of the missing sun's light interesting stars like the bright-green Karna can be seen, not to mention the astonishing north shinings. But ironic - in this lands you can't find any crystal rose - they only grow in the three valleys between the two huge mountains.


Legend of the Frozen Loner:
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hundreds of years ago there were a man who wanted to kill goddess Ivelin, the same goddess on which is called the closest moon to the world, which is making the eternal blackout of the north lands and every twenty years it starts the Great Winter for whole two years. His plan was to burn her face with fire magic, ruining her beauty - the goddess was sayed to be beautiful as the winter's beauty she creates. After this the goddess was planned to fall in panic and to search for a cure for her ruined beauty. The same man was planning to show to her as another man and sell her a potion which will recover her. But this potion was actually poison, the only thing which can actually kill the goddess. But when he wanted to attack her and saw her beauty he stunned and was amazed. Soon he fell under her beauty's will and told her what he was planning to do. Ivelin sayed: "You wanted to destroy my beauty and existence, aswell with my kingdom, but now you will become a part of it." after which the man's blood became an ice and his emotions died. The goddess used the power of the gale to throw him in the middle of the valley (Kirosa) where he started wandering around in the deep shows and wild storms searching for his way out not knowing that his life is actually no more. When the Great winter moved away he just vanished and re-appear on the next Great winter. And this way every twenty years this poor man's soul is sayed to wander around in the cold lands searching for his way out.




***Skypia***(the story which was born in Skype based over ideas which I made one year earlier in mIRC. This is also the story of "travelling" since I write it time to time in the train when I travel from my hometown to the town in which is my university).
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The sun slowly raised and soon after, enlighted with it's soft rays the yet sleeping small village Omter. The village itself was just in the very start of the small mountain Grenorodia, which was located to the north of the village and touching with the woods to the west. The sun slowly raised, while the early awakened peasants already started their daily jobs - feeding the farm animals, cleaning up the houses and other daily village routine jobs.
No exception from that was Nezera - young brunette girl, in her early twenties. She was one of the most beautiful girls in the village - the young and not so young mens oftenly looked at her, wishing for her. Her gentle face, her dark-brown eyes and gentle curved body made her very tempting, but she always managed to withdraw from the intentions of the villagers.
She was living in the north-west end of the village - just right in the place where the mountain and the woods were meeting each other. Her home wasn't anything special at all - an ordinary village house on one floor with two rooms, in which she was living with her mother, while her fater rarely came, because he was a merchant and had to travel a lot around the continent. They also had a small yard, in which they looked after some chickens, which they had in their small shed. Nezera's mother - Rena - awake little before her and already was cleaning the house, while Nezera had to feed the chickens and after that to help her mother to water the vegetables in their small garden.

The sun was already high, it was already afternoon. Rena and Nezera finished their chores for the day - for this time of the year there wasn't big amount of work to do, which could consume their whole days. The maiden decided to take a walk, but before she walk out of the house, she made sure no one from the villagers is there to beg for attention from her, and after that she walked to her favorite place. It was the creek in the woods - a small creek, springing almost from the peak of the mountain, traveling through the woods, until it's joining with the river Delie. Her favorite secret place was just next to a rock, high around half meter, from which the creek fell in a small waterfall. Nezera loved this place, because of the nice seducing sound of falling water and she oftenly took a small nap here, or just stared at the water.
She reached to the place and laid on the ground just next to the creek and looked at it's bottom. The girl thought about staying for the rest of the day again here, staring at the water, while deeply walking in her mind. She oftenly asked herself does she belong here, in this village, she never were feeling good here, she had the need for adventures, actions, and there were none here, if we cross out the pesty devoted to the raw needs villagers, one of which got a slap from her, because he hugged her without any permission. Nezera wondered what happened with all the magic for which her mother told her that it just vanished weeks before her birth - twenty-one years ago.
Laying on the ground, the girl felt that her eyes are slowly closing under the monotonously sound of the falling water. She decided to take a nap and she was not concerned about the safety - there were no predators, or creatures, for which she knew about the villagers - trolls, gnomes and others. While her eyes slowly were closing, her sight suddenly stopped over something shining in the water, which reflected the sun ray, managed to cross the wood's branches and leaves. The girl opened her eyes and saw that it was something made from metal - a ring, which slowly moved under the pressure of the creek. She reached her hand and grabbed the ring, after which she looked it - it was most probably a silver ring, judging to the grey color. The thing which captured her attention was the green stone and the two small, engraved to the ring, rainbows. Nezera liked the ring and tried it on, but she quickly saw it was just too big for her and this somehow disappointed her, but she decided to look it more carefully - she saw that the rainbows were actually engraved with inner lines, making them look like real rainbows, only the colors were missing. The stone was a perfectly shaped hexagon, and the green color was deep and very pure. Suddenly the girl saw some yellow scratch inside the stone. After looking it more carefully, she saw that it isn't a scratch, but a some form of small text, but it was too tiny for her to read it. It wasn't long for her to became curious what the text says, so she walked quickly to her home - in her shelf she had a magnifying glass, from those which the jewelry crafters used. This glass was a gift from her father, who bought it from on of his friends, working as jewelry crafter at one of the port towns
Nezera entered her empty home - her mother were in the neighbor house, in which she and some other womens gathered to weave some carpets, which Nezera's father can take and sell at the markets. The girl quickly went into her room, got out the magnifying glass and sat next to the window to see the ring under the sun's light. She looked the text filled with even more curiosity, thinking that this most probably won't be written in letireta - the language on which the people were reading and writing on this part of the continent. But fortunetly for the girl, the text was letireta. She looked it carefully, and whispered the words, while moving the magnifying glass:
- "My... home... is there... where... the elves... planted... their... first... tree"
Nezera looked up, thinking:"My home is there where the elves planted their first tree?"
But this has no sense at all, what if it has, but it's a riddle? The girl wondered what it means, for what home the text was saying anyway? Аccidentally, she pushed one of the rainbows, and she quickly became surprised that she didn't felt the small pressure of the metal, because the small rainbow actually moved little under the stone. With curiosity, she pressed the rainbow to the end, but seeing that nothing happens after it's fully under, she tried to pull it out with her nail, but with no success. After quickly giving up, she saw that the rainbow actually started to move back out by itself, like something was pushing it from the inside. And when the rainbow returned to it's original position, Nezera became evidence to something for which she though it was a dream - the gem turned from green to a deep bloody red, deeper than a ruby! The girl stunned looked at the stone and just to make sure that she is not dreaming, she pressed the rainbow again. After the rainbow returned into it's original position the stone again changed it's color, but this time it became deep blue, deep like the midnight sky. Nezera even more wondered about her just dreaming, so she pressed the rainbow again. The stone turned from blue again to green. Still unbelieving to what just happened, the girl quickly was again filled with curiosity, now wondering what will happen if she press the other rainbow. But this gave no result - the rainbow returned to it's position without making any change. She pressed again, but again nothing happened. Then she remembered about the text.
- Hey, what if the other two colors also have some texts? - said to herself Nezera.
She pressed the first rainbow and the stone again turned into the bloody ruby. She took the magnifying glass and saw that the text changed, and this time she whispered:
- "I'm the heart of Harnaan Highborne and my home is there, where his deadly fire-breath protected his treasures."
Nezera got amused by those words and with more curiosity pressed the rainbow, which changed again the bloody ruby into the midnight blue stone on which she saw new text which she whispered again to herself:
- "My home is the birth-place of the three big life-giving sisters, and my home is protected by the Fire king and the Somnolent milady."
Nezera looked through the window wondering - the first two sentences didn't made a single sense for her, but this one - this just didn't had any sign of sense for her. Birth-place? Life-giving sisters? Fire king and somnolent milady? What was their meaning? She didn't had a single clue about this names, they certanly ment something, but what? Most probably thongs for which the limits of the village life didn't allowed her to know.
While she was wondering, she pressed continuously the rainbow, changing the colors of the stone. She also pressed the other one time to time, when she changed the colors, but that didn't gave any result. Then she got idea - what if she press the two rainbows together? She quickly pressed them, filled again with curiosity. After the two rainbows getting back into their position, the stone did changed from the last color to which it was - the bloody red - to black on which the tiny yellow text looked even brighter, like a piece of golden hair. She again took the magnifying glass and again whispered the text written in the stone:
- "Fuse me with me three fragments and I shall repay you by getting back my light, which will amaze you. Only then you will see the path."
The girl again wondered about the possibility this to be just a dream. Maybe she really felt asleep at the creek? But this was just so real, it just wasn't possible to be a dream, she never had such real-looking dream. But if this was indeed a dream, then she wanted to stay in it little longer, just to find out what all this means. Fragments, light, path - things which doesn't had any sense for her.
While she was thinking, her mother came home. The girl quickly put back into her shelf the magnifying glass and dropped the ring in one of her pockets - she wasn't thinking about telling her for the things which happened. Not yet.
- Hello, dear. I didn't expected you to be here so early - said Rena, seeing her daughter.
- I decided to spend some time here.
- Good. And I'm here to take some of the yarns.
Rena went to the big wooden chest, opened it and took a small brown cloth bag, in which she stored some of the yearns. For a moment Nezera though about telling her about the ring, be she halted herself. She wanted to find out more about it first, before showing it to anybody. But actually, there was someone in the village to which she was able to show it - to Petra, one of the oldest womens there, which lived alone in the small wooden house in the north end of the village. For the people she was a weird person, because without any reason she oftenly said things, which were with no sense at all for the simple minds of the villagers. She wasn't from this village - people said that she appeared in here little after the magic's disappear from the world before twenty-one years ago and some of them said that she is a witch. But Nezera was sure that she can help her, for her, no matter how weird she looked, Petra was a very smart women. And besides - if Petra start telling the people that Nezera has a ring with changing it's colors stone, no one would believe her.

- Grandma Petra - said on loud voice Nezera, while knocking on the door of the wooden house.
- Who annoys me? - answered an angry voice from inside.
- It's Nezera.
- The cute little girl, which no one leaves alone? - asked the voice little more warmer
- The same. - answered the girl with a little smile on her face.
The door opened and the old women showed.
- What is it, child?
- I would like to ask you something.
- Really? Come in, come in, don't stand on the door
Petra was friendly to very small amount of people from the village, one of them was Nezera, for which, as Petra says - makes her think about herself when she were young
- Say now, what is it? - asked the old women, after giving the girl a chair.
- Does this ring looks atleast little familiar for you? - asked Nezera, getting out the ring from her pocket, with the stone again changed to the bloody red ruby.
The old women took the ring and expect it carefully, gave it back to the girl and said:
- I'm sorry, I can't see anything special in it.
- This ring is very strange
- Why it's strange?
- Look - said Nezera and pressed the rainbow, from which the color changed again to deep blue
Petra quickly got amazed by the effect. The girl pressed one more time the rainbow and the stone again turned into green.
- Where did you get this ring from, child?
- I found it in the creek in the forest, grandma Petra. And that it's not all - there is a tiny golden text in the stone, which changes every time with the color. I saw what they are saying back in home with a magnifying glass.
- And what does the text says?
- When its red it says, that it is the heart of someone Harnaan Mighty, and that it's home it's there, where his fire-breath are protecting some treasures.
- Not Harnaan Mighty, but Harnaan Highborne, child.
- Do you know who he is?
- This is the name of a legendary dragon, for which is said to be huge and very fearsome, and that his fire-breath is the reason for many kingdoms to fall. It were wounded by an unknown hero, hidden behind his armor, which dissapeared somewhere little after he wounded the dragon. Harnaan is said that used his last strength to return back in it's lair, deep inside into a destroyed today volcano, located to the northwest from here. There, with his mighty last roar he made the rocks crack and the volcano to erupt, from which he were berried alive deep in the volcano.
- But then why the stone is saying that it's his heart?
- I dunno, child. Maybe because of the color, I really have no idea. And what are saying the other texts?
- When its blue it says that it's home is there where is the birthplace of three big life-giving sisters, which is protected by some fire king and a somnolent milady. What could it mean?
- Child, child, don't you know about the world surrounding you? Did no one told you about the rivers Reika, Delie and Mina, which are giving all the life to the plants and the animals around them? This are the biggest rivers in our known world!
- Oh, I see. And what about their birthplace? Is this the place from they spring?
- Exactly, child. All three rivers are springing from unreachable glaciers on the highest peak of mountain Dernii. The glaciers are so high, that people are thinking the sun and the moon are never stopping to shine over them.
- The Fire king and the Somnolent milady?
- Exactly - nodded Petra
And do you know where the elves planted their first tree at? Because the text of the stone when its green says that it's home it's there, where the elves planted their first tree.
- Hmm.. No, I have no idea here, I'm sorry
- Don't worry, I atleast know what the other two texts are meaning now. Oh, I almost forgot. There is one more text, it appears when I press both of the rainbows, then the stone turns into black and says that it will get it's light back, when he connect with three fragments, and after that it will show some path.
- Hmm.. I can't think anything related to it.
- No matter, the things you said to me are very interesting, for which I'm very thankful.
..
Almost two weeks passed from the day in which Nezera found the ring. For this days she didn't had the chance to learn anything more about the meanings of the golden sentences. More and more her hope was leaving that she may find something more. Even the incoming local celebration day of the village was unable to cheer her up. For that day the village was getting prepared to celebrate its day of the pumpkin, on which many entertainments and games were organized. Nezera personally, despite the enthusiasm of the others, didn't really liked this day, moreover that then not only that pesky young villagers which annoyed her were showing off more than ever, bur even more pesky guys from other villages were coming. Even the coming of the king himself this year, didn't made her even bit more happier. She decided that she will only take a peek of the celebrating, after which she will go to her favorite place near the creek and spend the rest of the day there.
And so, the celebrating day came - the local celebrating day for Omter, on which the locals organized shows in honor to their main live-giver - the pumpkin. On this usual celebrating they thought up many games connected to the pumpkin - eating contests, making faces over emptied pumpkins, fight with the pumpkin's leftovers and many more. But this year was different because of the increased number of guarding patrols and even the appearing of castle guards, because of the the royal family, which already was entering the village. The crowd welcomed with happy exclamations the royal chariot, in which were sitting the king Georgo, his wife - queen Steffena, their son, prince Seldo and his little sister - princess Vanesa. While Seldo were a matured young man, which soon was going to be announced by his father as ready for a wedding, Vanesa just turned her majority and were in the peak of her wild nature. She were very energetic, but also quite annoying for the others, because of her way to treat people. Despite the fact she was quite beautiful, her capricious nature and her urge to tease the others made her quite hated for many court members and castle guards. Now, when they were in the village, Vanesa got in her mind the idea to play with the locals her teasing games. She was standing near the small chariot window, marking in her mind potentiality preys. Her brother Seldo saw her concentration and asked her with his typical sense of humor:
- What is it, sister? Didn't you saw before a village with peasants, which are happy to see us?
- I saw, I saw many times before. I'm just watching outside.
Just a moment after Vanesa ended with her answer, she saw a young and handsome peasant. Only one look was enough for her to feel a weakness in her legs from some unknown feeling, maybe because of her youth. She quickly remembered him with details - young man, little above his twenties maybe, dressed with brown pants, some yellow to brown raw shirt, small thin mustache over his lip, deep brown eyes and short black hair. She hardly found patience for the chariot to stop, she and her family to get on the special made for them stage and to wait her dad's boring speech to end, with which the celebrating started to make the excuse that she had headache and that she will return to the chariot to rest. Of course, her head was fine, she went right to Rozu - one of the most loyal castle guards, which birthplace was this village and because of that he knew the region very well. Vanesa needed him, because she had already made a plan to capture the young man in her game. She needed a lonely isolated place, maybe a forest glade, which Rozu was able to find as local. Her plan was to send a guard to that man and tell him that she wants to see him alone in the woods, and when he gets there - another two guards, dressed up like bandits to pretend that they are attacking her. Her aim was to test his courage and loyalty and from there - is there any point to give him any attention at all.
Nezera already was laying near the creek on her favorite place and was thinking about taking a little nap, when suddenly she heard voices and footsteps getting closer to her. She quickly jumped and hide behind the large bushes, growing just before the rock - they were her most secure hideout all of the time, when someone from the village came here. She lowered quietly behind them, peeking from a small hole, making its way through the leafs, and saw the invaders of her secret place. It was two guards, carrying some dirty peasant cloths in their hands, which they put down on the ground when they stopped.
- Pf, our so lovely and loved by us all princess again wonders what to do - said one of the guards with obvious annoyance in his voice. - Now she wants us to dress up like some bandits, so that we can pretend that we are attacking her... Why the hell???
- What can I say - from Rozu I got the idea that she is wanting to test the bravery of some young village guy. Ain't he lucky..
- In this moment she is testing my nerves. If she wasn't the king's daughter, then I wouldn't pretend that I'm attacking her, but I would surely slay her, pfff.
- No need to get angry about it. Let's change already, because we will be actors after a little while.
- Hey, listen! - said the first guard and grabbed his sword.
Nezera shivered - she though that they heard her. But this idea quickly got away, when she heard third voice, far more rough:
- Hehe, what we have here - two small guards, which want to act like bandits.
- Who said that?? - said with severe voice the second guard.
- Me, one real bandit - answered the rough voice and behind the guards showed a very big man with rough beard and big raw shaped knife in his hand.
- Who do you think you are? - said the first guard, pulling out his sword. - we are royal guards!
- And I'm evil bandit leader and I can do this - said the man and clicked with fingers,
Only a moment after the second guard fell death on his face to the ground with pointing from his back arrow.
- Stan! - shouted the first guard on the sight of his death comrade.
- And now tell me what were you preparing to do, before I decide to make you join your comrade - said the huge man, while his comrades together with the shooter appeared from the woods, surrounding the guard.
Before the guard had time to react, the bandit sticked the blade of his knife against his neck and grumbled:
- Now!
- Never! I prefer to die than betraying the ones which I serve!
- Well, as you wish.
Nezera somehow hold her scream from the horror, which she saw - the huge man with one swing cut down the guard's head. She was so scared, that she had no chance but to stand still and continue to watch with the hope that the bandits will leave soon.
- As I heard, our sweety - the princess is nearby. - said the bandit to his mens - Quickly, let's go and find her, before our luck to fade away. From now I can taste the huge amount of gold which we will get for her freedom!
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Postby firefly » Sun Nov 08, 2009 9:07 pm

They are beautiful. Legend of the Frozen Loner is one of my favourites. And of course, you know I like your amvs +::clap
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Re: Thauma's stuff

Postby Saphira » Sun Nov 08, 2009 9:48 pm

Gosh you are very creative, I am humbled
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Re: Thauma's stuff

Postby Thaumaturgist » Sun Nov 08, 2009 11:16 pm

And gosh - I need to fix my spelling. +::biggrin
I feel so ashamed for seeing how terrible my writing was before one year +::fear
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Re: Thauma's stuff

Postby RPGeez » Wed Nov 11, 2009 8:22 pm

I read through what you have posted and I think it is very creative, unique and very interesting.

I enjoyed it a lot.

Sometimes I wish I had more creativity but I find it hard because I am a left brain type of person. No excuses but I have a hard time being as creative and engaging as you and some of the members on this forum.

It would be nice to see where your ideas and creativity take you.

It is not easy to put together a novel and engage the reader. +::Thumbup +::wizard
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Re: Thauma's stuff

Postby grisel1 » Fri Nov 13, 2009 7:57 am

you're AMV is great! :D and also i have 2 videos that i recorded at youtube too. :)
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Re: Thauma's stuff

Postby Thaumaturgist » Fri Nov 13, 2009 12:09 pm

I need to improve more and more. Since I became an active member of the biggest Bulgarian anime forum (I even became moderator there +::O_o ) I'm seeing many well made AMVs, which are making me kinda jealous and are pushing me from the inside to the need to make something better. Heck, I have three (and little more) months winter vacation, between the semesters, coming up - guess I'll have plenty of time to try something about it.
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Re: Thauma's stuff

Postby SurferGranny » Fri Nov 13, 2009 4:49 pm

Thauma, your writing is really nice. Creative and well thought out. Spelling can be corrected, but having the ideas is something very special! Keep up the good work! I'm not the Oracle, but I forsee a great future for you! +::YAY
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Re: Thauma's stuff

Postby Thaumaturgist » Wed Aug 04, 2010 12:43 pm

Not exactly art.. But...


A-anyway:

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Postby jyarceus1993 » Wed Aug 04, 2010 1:06 pm

+::O_o +::O_o +::O_o +::lol ROTFL XD
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Re: Thauma's stuff

Postby chrome » Wed Aug 04, 2010 1:18 pm

Great writings! :)
Behave jya!
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Re: Thauma's stuff

Postby jyarceus1993 » Thu Aug 05, 2010 8:41 am

What?What? +::biggrin I was laughing at the recent one...Not the others XD

Anyway,I love the Legend of the Frozen Loner +::clap So,cool :)
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Re: Thauma's stuff

Postby Thaumaturgist » Tue Aug 10, 2010 7:44 pm

Someone remembering me saying I'll work on a game called "Boredom Kingdom" when I'm bored? It was before the last back-up using (got erased, or I just can't find, doesn't matter). Well, I won't make it anymore! I never were any good at game making. But I AM good at another thing - I'm a pretty darn good writer, I dare to say. So that is why, I'm thinking of writing the story as a short and easy to read off story. This way, I can even get to the sequels of the story I have in my head. Stay tuned for my crappy works :)
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Re: Thauma's stuff

Postby Thaumaturgist » Tue Aug 10, 2010 8:56 pm

Sooo, finally, after a long wait (1 hour, huh....) Scene 1 is ready.
Before I paste it, little info of how I'm going to process:
- at each scene, if there is a new character/change of a character, I'm going to post at the very beginning the faceset I cropped for the game, since I'm not very motivated to write how they look. Yea, its a spoiler, but watch me care +:oops:
- I'll kill everyone who dares to say something funny about my grammar +::shhhh





And, well, after a long and dreadful wait, here is the punishme... erm.... writing I give to you all:




SCENE 1 - It began with a flash!
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Image - Tharos
- W-where am I? What is this place? – asked to herself Boerika, after finding herself into a deep forest. – Am I dreaming? How is this so real?
A fading roar suddenly echoed around the young girl.
- Oh, dream, or not, I better get out of here, now.
After this words, Boerika turned around and snapped a big branch from the nearest tree. She wanted to feel even a bit safe with something in her hands, dream or not.
She started walking towards the lighter part of the forest, hoping it’s the way out of it. Suddenly, the bushes on her left started to move and shortly after two big rat-like creatures jumped out, running directly to her. She screamed and tried to defend herself with the branch, but one of the rats managed to pull it off from her hand, while the other one jumped over her, trying to bite her. As she was trying to keep the rat away from her in her panic, a sudden flash appeared, in a thunder roam, and the rat fell dead on the ground . The other rat, seeing what happened, quickly ran off. Boerika got on her feet, trying to figure what just happened. Even scared, she rushed towards the lighter part of the forest, not caring anymore if she was going to be attacked again, she just wanted to get out of this nightmare place. But in vain – three wolves appeared in front of her. She feel of her knees, with tears in her eyes and shouted:
- Someone, please! Save me!
- Let me assist you! – said someone behind her.
Boerika turned to the direction of the voice and saw a man with a hood, covering his face and body. The man raised his hand, in which he was holding a wooden staff. After a moment, the tip of the staff glowed and three thunders emerged from it, directly to the wolves, killing them the very moment, they touched them.
- This would help for now – said the hooded man, walking towards Boerika. He kneed next to her, asking – Are you okay?
- I… I think so… But… What happened??? I was at home, doing my homework, and all of a sudden, I found myself into this strange forest! And of top that, I was attacked by huge scary creatures! And you – you appeared out of nowhere and killed them with some flashy stuff!
- Please, calm down.
- How can I calm down? I'm scared, I don't even know where I am, and I'm talking to the weirdest stranger, who hides his face! At least tell me your name!
- I'm Tharos. I'm sorry, but I can't show my face, because of few things. But for now, you must follow me.
- In normal situation, I would never trust a person like you, but I'm too scared of this place, so I'll follow you... Do I have a choice…. Oh, and my name is Boerika.
- Okay, Boerika. I'll explain to you all that is going on here, when we go somewhere safe. But for now, let me do one more thing.
A strange light surrounded Boerika, with a misty ethereal noise. After a second both the light and the noise were gone.
- What just happened?... I'm feeling... warm.. and.. more safer now... What have you done to me?
- I just gave you your magical powers.
- What? Magical powers? – Boerika moved a step away. - Are you even okay?! Magic doesn't exist!
- I won't debate with you. For now, take this rod with you, you'll need to defend yourself. – Tharos handed to the girl a shiny metal rod. - Now, let's get moving, I'll explain everything you need to know, once we get out of here.
Boerika looked at the forest, then to the hooded Tharos, then again to the forest and with a sad look just nodded in agreement to Tharos.
Soon, they exited the forest and Tharos told Boerika that there is a small seaside town on the other side of the hills.
- We need to get to the ship for the main land – said Tharos when they entered the town. – I can see by your face, that you are starting to get even more nervous. But, please, trust me little more. Despite my appearance, I am no treat to you.
- Yes… I better follow you, I want to know what is going on anyway.
The two of them soon got onto the ship, which was already preparing to set sail to the main land. When the ship finally left the town, Boerika got in front of Tharos and almost shout at him:
- Would you at tell me little about what is going on?!
- Good, but promise you won’t panic.
- Ok-kay…. Okay, I promise!
- This is actually not a dream, surely you were thinking this way, didn’t you?
- Yes, I did…
- This is an actual reality. You were summoned into this world. In here, magic is existing, its no fantasy novel, this here is the real thing. You were summoned here by the local high wizards in order to help them in their battle against the rising evil forces.
- Oh… This is…
- Please, calm down. Its not so bad, as you think. There are five more people from other worlds yet to come to this world. I was also summoned by them, a whole month earlier, and they gave me the mission to gather you all in order to join force together. They also gave me the skills to awake your magical powers you will need while you are here.
- This is… I… Ah… I need to rest for a while, I’ll go somewhere little more comfortable to think about this ridiculous situation I got myself into. Excuse me!

(btw, it took me around 40 minutes to write this stuff, huh. More than a half of the dialogues are directly from the game)
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