For the most part, I enjoyed the game but there are a couple of things I would like to discuss:
1. I don't like that the games ends at the Mystrock bridge and you can't go back after you defeat the dragon. The only magic guild in the game is in that area and you can't use any magic orbs that you acquire after you defeat the dragon. I think is should end at the cave at the bottom of the Mystrock area.
2. I also don't like that the Mayor of Lorelei locks you out and you can't go back to see the girl on the second floor who sells items. That's one of very few places that you can buy items. Except for Mani's. You can sell to the two witches in the swamp and to the guy in the cave but you can't buy. Also there aren't a lot of items for sell anywhere after you defeat the dragon because you can't go back to Mystrock territory. Which means that you are left with a boatload of money and nowhere to spend it, so when it comes time to import you're basically stuck.
3. This has been addressed in other threads but you should put a Veteran Orc somewhere other than in the Orc cave because of the dynamite issue. It doesn't have to be somewhere easy. Just somewhere you can get dynamite for the quests.
Just my 2 cents worth
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