I was able to see it by retrieving the link though, and it's excellent! Good job. When you resize it, I can feature in a "finished artworks" featuring topic or sth
I think it's pretty good lol don't be too hard on you. the colours are also well done. Still too big for this forum xD I may feature it on the site instead.
What you could try is have him in a fighting stance or something like that
I've locked it so that the thread is just about displaying the arts, not discussing them (it can be done in the other threads, like her for instance ^^)