Indinera wrote:with 50 hours a day you would have my games in a perfect english totally complimenting the stories I write ( )
Your English has improved enormously over the years, so be proud of that, but, as with any language, it's the prepositions and some verbs which cause the problems (I speak from personal experience here! I speak 2 other languages and can read a couple more, and it's always the prepositions and some verb tenses which cause me grief). For example, you use "elude" (are you translating eviter?) which in context should almost always be "avoid", and occasionally "evade", but almost never "elude". It's probably the sort of thing that only a native English speaker would pick up.