Let's talk about the story
Posted: Tue Oct 06, 2009 7:19 amTell me how you felt about it, and what kind of stuff you look forward in the future installments! 
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Posted: Tue Oct 06, 2009 7:19 amRe: Let's talk about the story
Posted: Tue Oct 06, 2009 10:22 amI'll think about it on my Road Trip and answer when I get back. First cup of coffee you know.
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Re: Let's talk about the story
Posted: Tue Oct 06, 2009 10:30 amOK lol
Re: Let's talk about the story
Posted: Tue Oct 06, 2009 5:27 pmI already wrote it in feedback, I would like to see some more twists and excitement, the croc hunt is an excelent example imo, I really loved this part of the game. But I suppose this won't be a problem, considering the assassin hired by Lord Dragon in the very end.
Re: Let's talk about the story
Posted: Tue Oct 06, 2009 9:32 pmOk, let's!
As I already wrote in the feedback topic, I thought the story flowed nicely and that with time (given this is a game being released in small installments) the characters will grow into us even more - already after playing the game a few times we start having favorites! I also felt that you gave us enough information in the game to keep us wondering about what will happen over the next chapters...
For instance, regarding the 10 missing fighters: maybe they won't all be strangers - Benoit might change his mind and join in (he wouldn't really abandon his cousin, would he?); Marine's father (given he is such a powerful fighter) might recover and join them as well, or maybe even Marine might discover her missing mum somewhere leading a rebellious group against the bad city guys... I also want to know who the opposition will be - maybe you can even put us playing as the other team - that would be interesting!!!
Apart from that I'm quite keen to get on that boat and sail away... preferably avoiding the spy that is coming after Marine - maybe he can get trapped on a mirror or hold hostage by some fit
bear!
You also left us with enough locked doors and unused items for us to keep checking whether we are still missing something in this game or if indeed we just have to wait and see what happens with these question marks on the next chapter.
Finally, I want to see where your wickedness will take us next and whether or not we can keep our royal titles!!!
What will be the title of the next chapter - have you already decided?
As I already wrote in the feedback topic, I thought the story flowed nicely and that with time (given this is a game being released in small installments) the characters will grow into us even more - already after playing the game a few times we start having favorites! I also felt that you gave us enough information in the game to keep us wondering about what will happen over the next chapters...
For instance, regarding the 10 missing fighters: maybe they won't all be strangers - Benoit might change his mind and join in (he wouldn't really abandon his cousin, would he?); Marine's father (given he is such a powerful fighter) might recover and join them as well, or maybe even Marine might discover her missing mum somewhere leading a rebellious group against the bad city guys... I also want to know who the opposition will be - maybe you can even put us playing as the other team - that would be interesting!!!
Apart from that I'm quite keen to get on that boat and sail away... preferably avoiding the spy that is coming after Marine - maybe he can get trapped on a mirror or hold hostage by some fit
bear! You also left us with enough locked doors and unused items for us to keep checking whether we are still missing something in this game or if indeed we just have to wait and see what happens with these question marks on the next chapter.
Finally, I want to see where your wickedness will take us next and whether or not we can keep our royal titles!!!
What will be the title of the next chapter - have you already decided?
Re: Let's talk about the story
Posted: Tue Oct 06, 2009 9:58 pmthanks for this awesome feedback - so many good points
i wish i could tell you more about it and engage a conversation, but no, it's impossible for now ^^
i can only tell one thing: episode 2 will be called "take me higher"
hope you like and start to think of possible plots with such title 
i wish i could tell you more about it and engage a conversation, but no, it's impossible for now ^^
i can only tell one thing: episode 2 will be called "take me higher"
hope you like and start to think of possible plots with such title
Re: Let's talk about the story
Posted: Tue Oct 06, 2009 10:44 pmCheers! No problem!! I would enjoy that conversation as well but understand that you can not reveal too much for now and also that you are already on a tight schedule for all your other releases!!
"Take me higher"... makes me think of turbo jumping shoes!!! Ahahah! Maybe even higher mountains or who knows flying ships and distant planets...
"Take me higher"... makes me think of turbo jumping shoes!!! Ahahah! Maybe even higher mountains or who knows flying ships and distant planets...
Re: Let's talk about the story
Posted: Tue Oct 06, 2009 11:09 pmmaybe it's spiritual too (hint hint )
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Posted: Wed Oct 07, 2009 7:06 amBenoit reminds me of the kid down the road, while growing up. I can almost hear him say "I'm gonna tell".
Think it would take something tragic happening to him, before he woke up. Then. I might be able to accept him as being one of the chosen 13.
I was thinking the same thing about Marine's father getting better and joining them. Maybe Marine finds enchanted boxing gloves and she travels all over trying to find this hero. Only to realize they belong to her father.
So far I'm enjoying the story. Like the animals not dropping gold, having the characters not become instant mates, gives it a more realistic feel. This is fantasy though, so maybe they'll run into some creature that was only supposed to exist in legends, to help them out.
Think it would take something tragic happening to him, before he woke up. Then. I might be able to accept him as being one of the chosen 13.
I was thinking the same thing about Marine's father getting better and joining them. Maybe Marine finds enchanted boxing gloves and she travels all over trying to find this hero. Only to realize they belong to her father.
So far I'm enjoying the story. Like the animals not dropping gold, having the characters not become instant mates, gives it a more realistic feel. This is fantasy though, so maybe they'll run into some creature that was only supposed to exist in legends, to help them out.
Re: Let's talk about the story
Posted: Wed Oct 07, 2009 7:20 amgives it a more realistic feel.
As for the plot, I can tell it gets absolutely epic, passionate, moving.... in a way, I can't wait to tell it!
Also in the episode 2 you get to see more of the reigning 13...... and it's quite awesome
Re: Let's talk about the story
Posted: Wed Oct 07, 2009 7:23 amso maybe they'll run into some creature that was only supposed to exist in legends
would have to fit with the rules though
only Humans can take part in, and hand to hand fights only
Re: Let's talk about the story
Posted: Wed Oct 07, 2009 8:53 pmIndinera wrote:only Humans can take part in, and hand to hand fights only
Does that mean they can not use their innate skills?
Re: Let's talk about the story
Posted: Wed Oct 07, 2009 8:55 pmthey cannot use magic - but they can use things like marine's side-kick etc.
Re: Let's talk about the story
Posted: Wed Oct 07, 2009 9:06 pmThanks, that's what I meant!
Re: Let's talk about the story
Posted: Wed Oct 07, 2009 9:15 pmYes, that they can definitely use ^^