by littlebro » Tue Oct 29, 2019 4:49 pm
I tried to like this game, but I'm afraid I failed in the attempt.
Could I suggest that you get someone to proof read this. Your opening section, giving all the background lore, is full of grammatical errors, as I suspected it might be when I read the extract from it describing the game in the opening post. My guess is that English is not your native language, and it is very rare for someone to be sufficient fluent in their second language not to need someone to check it. Those grammatical errors continue afterwards, and I couldn't bear the thought of having to disentangle the dialogues etc each time.
You have an incredibly loud sound effect to go with the display of each word in dialogues. (As an aside, I think it's likely that this is one contributor to your extraordinarly large download size.) It is so loud that it nearly drowns out your background music, and there is no option for the player to turn it off. While others may not mind, I found it irritating, and not something that I could block out.
I am used to ATB, so the slow fill up of the bar didn't bother me. What did bother me about the battles was the use of the default RTP music, which, together with the default sound effects for cursor, cancel etc., gives the impression that this is one side of the game which could do with some tender love on your part. I get that as a new developer you will be working with a tight budgert, but there are loads of free sound effects and music tracks which you could use.
However, what was the deal breaker for me was the fact that I'm expected to trail all the way back to the King in order to save. Just simply no. Apart from being indescribably boring to have to hoof it over the same ground again and again, there are times when I have to stop and don't have, or don't want to spend, some minutes walking back so that I don't lose my progress.
I did think very hard about whether to post or not, but decided to do so because unless someone tells you these things, how are you going to know?