Hello, everyone!
In preparation for my purchase and play of LS, I watched a 3SoD playthrough on youtube!
The plot is very intelligent, imaginative and surrealistic, full of witty humour, as I expected, up to the standard I knew from the LF trilogy I own. I like the existence of a meteo in the Hall of Madness very much, for example. The characters' development is nice too. Congratulations!
Nevertheless, there are a some of plot problems.
1) By the time Random rushes to the hut in the lamias' village, Sarah has already complained she is hurt by the boiling water! Therefore, when Random comes back with the millipuff, she should be either dead or severely burnt. She may have healed her own burns as an elf right before or right after healing the millipuff, but this should have been clearly mentioned in the dialogue.
2) After the team returns from the forest ans is sent into prison, there should have been a mention of the rescued pets. How they took them back to town and what became of them.
3) Even in the Hall of Madness, economics in shops work sensibly, like the other worlds. So, it is unclear why someone sells for 1.000 a house that could gemerate them tens of thousands a day.
Especially the first one is an important overlook. I am sure LS plot is epic crazy, but I really hope we do not come across such leaks on the fabric!!